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Post by jackscrap on Jan 23, 2020 1:48:35 GMT
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Post by cats4jan on Jan 23, 2020 3:25:19 GMT
Such a lovely family page. Only comment I have is that it needs a date and maybe a little journaling to complete the page’s story.
I like the background paper and the sepia tone of the photo really connotes age. And if I’m getting really picky here, I’d suggest your title go on the right instead of the left because that is where my eye wants to go as it travels down the page.
But realize - as I say all the time - there is no one “correct” way to make our scrapbook pages. If you are pleased with the result - that is all that is important.
However, I do firmly believe dating a page is one of the most important aspects of making these pages for future generations to know more about our families.
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Post by jackscrap on Jan 23, 2020 3:39:14 GMT
I do firmly believe dating a page Thanks Janice, I have put 1964 just to the right of brothers, that's just my guess at the year this was taken. I really appreciate your very constructive comments, and I do agree with the title placement, will have to go back and play some more. I have an idea for some journalling too, something I always avoid... |
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Post by jackscrap on Jan 23, 2020 4:32:36 GMT
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Post by Lillias on Jan 23, 2020 9:23:20 GMT
What a lovely family photo Jackie. Definitely a keeper. Love the tag and the fun journaling.
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Post by cats4jan on Jan 23, 2020 10:55:11 GMT
Sorry, I missed the date in your original. I really like your changes - using the tag for your journaling is perfect. The title placement really works for me, but I want to state again — it’s a personal preference of mine...
One other hint - don’t rework indefinitely. We can get mired in doubt and that will take the joy out of the creation process.
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Post by hmca on Jan 23, 2020 13:14:09 GMT
Love this, Jacki! Great starting picture, background paper (love) and choice of embellishments.
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